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PostSubject: Baines Carter   Baines Carter EmptyThu Jul 19, 2018 11:01 pm

Name: Baines Carter
Age: 28
Height / Weight: 6’2”, slender, fit but not buff
Eyes: grey
Hair/beard: blond; scruff that gradually keeps getting more like a beard the longer he goes without a shave
Occupation before the end: An actor that hasn’t had his big break yet. Has found work previously in various history channel shows as a reenactor. Would prefer to get cast in an indie film over a Hollywood one. Denies that his looks would get him a job if he just tried out for one of those shitty action films. He trains in various styles of martial arts, really likes jiu jitsu.
Appearance: Grey t-shirt, jeans. Simple stuff. Has a large silver ring that he wears around his neck on a chain and occasionally on his middle finger. It was his father’s.

Bennies: 3 (?)
Attributes (spent 5 points to raise):
Agility (dex): d8
Smarts (knowledge of world): d6
Spirit (willpower): d6
Strength: d8
Vigor (endurance/resistance): d6

Charisma: 0+2 modified (modified with edges / hindrances only)
Pace: Crouch: 3" (6m), Walk: 6" (12m), Run: 6" +1d6.
Parry: 2+half fighting
Toughness (damage threshold): 2+half vigor 3= 5 (+armor)

Skills: (0 left to spend)
Climbing (strength) d6 (2 points)
Fighting (agility) d10 (5 points)
Streetwise (smarts) d6 (2 points)
Notice (smarts) d8 (4 points)
Persuasion (spirit): d6 (2 points)

Edges / Hindrances: (4 points spent raising agility and strength)
Major: Curious--has to check everything
Minor: Loyal
Minor: Quirk--talks far too much about how he “found” acting / acting in general

Background edges:
Attractive: charisma +2

Gear:
Armor: 0
Weapons: 0
Other gear: weight 8, cost 95
Backpack (weight 2, cost 50
Canteen (modern) (w 1, c 5)
Handcuffs (modern) (w 2, c 15)
Cell phone (c 20)
Umbrella (w 2, c 5)
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PostSubject: Re: Baines Carter   Baines Carter EmptySat Jul 21, 2018 10:31 am

All right, let's take a look.

1) Bennies are correct. Start play with 3.

2) Attributes look good after buying the extra boosts with hindrances.

3) Charisma should read simply "2." Pace looks good. Parry should be 7 (2+5 fighting). Toughness can be formatted the same "Toughness: 5 (2 + 3 Vigor)"

4) Skills look great.

OK, all the crunch looks really good. I would like to see a lot more in developing your PCs personality. Also, go more into those hindrances. I like the quirk, but Curious and Loyal could use some more. He has to check everything, but think about why that is and tie it into your personality. With Loyal, to whom is he loyal? Everyone he meets? His umbrella? etc.

Other than that, well done.

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